WALT:use descriptive sentences to show emotion not tell emotion
{sad}The boy watched with his watery eyes as the dog got hit by a car his bottom lip trembled and his eyes poured out water like a waterfall he tried to mop up the tears that streamed down his checks but it was no use the tears kept spilling out he could give his tears to people at Africa if he continued to cry.THE END
Monday, May 3, 2010
Maia
Posted by Room 2 Rocks at 11:29 AM
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