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Monday, May 17, 2010

Jackson

One sunny morning me and my ship crew were going to find the treasure before the other pirates. We get to the place where the treasure is the other pirates are no where to be seen so I was as happy as clown. We found the treasure “get this” I say to my ship crew then Nikora drops some of it and we lost some of our treasure so he has to clean the deck. When we got back on the ship Taylor and Aaron were practicing sword fighting with the wood swords and miss was getting the cannon all shiny like the water. Then my parrot named Jack says there is other ship over there so everyone went inside because they are scared of pirate Nikora did not. Then a pirate came on the ship then Nikora hit him round the head with his mop and he got knock out. Then he put him in the over board. Nikora went and got the captain his name is Jackson and Nikora says the pirates are trying to get the treasure . Then everyone came out then some more pirates came on our ship. Now there was a fight we are stabbing them and one of the other pirates eyes came out. We kill all of them but then some more came on our blood boat and we were like o man and then miss got stabbed in the heart by the bad pirates captain. Then I go up behind him and stab him in the back then all of them run away. Then we though all of them over bored even Miss. Now we are having a party but Nikora because he has to clean up all the blood

1 comments:

Neil Hirini said...

Please don not use stabbing in your stories Jack. It is violent and not allowed at school.