chanelle

WALT: use descriptive sentences and figurative language in our writing. We designed a picture, and then wrote a descriptive story about it, focusing on illustrative language use. We used www.kerpoof.com to draw our pictures.
The Sea Horses Emerge

It was Thursday 11th March 2006. The treasure was safe. But then the killer whales came, everyone took cover in the sea weed. The jellyfish tried to sting the killer whales away and the sea police tried too. The treasure was not safe now. Because the killer whales were wanting to get it but the whales couldn’t find it because the puffer fish were hiding it from them and the sea weed was too. The crab was clinking its claws. The fish were hiding in the boat too. Because the killer whales can’t find it they say they will take over the bay but nobody else believed them. The jellyfish got scared. Then that’s when the sea horses emerge. Out came the sea horses to scare the killer whales away and they did scare them away and everyone was happy.
Lynda