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Tuesday, May 18, 2010

Under the sea

One day there were divers. They were going to the sea. It was called beyond the sea. One of the divers, Max, had a treasure box. The treasure box had fruit in it. Max said “Where is the gold?” Then Max’s dad come over and said “Why fruit in the treasure box is and who put it in there?” When Max’s dad was thinking who put it in there, Max was just eating the food. Then Max’s dad said “What are you doing?” Then Max said “I am having something to eat.” Then Max’s dad, Rob, said “Don’t eat all of it. I am coming to get something to eat.” When he came over a shark came over and took Max away. The shark that took him was a great white. Rob was looking for him, then a very nice caring dolphin said “I can find him.” Then the dolphin went to find him. It took sixteen minutes to get there. The dolphin picked up Max and took him back to his dad. His dad was happy to see him. Behind them were sixteen sharks. They were not happy, but then the dolphin chased them away. Then Max’s dad said “Let’s go home.”
Max said “I want to take the treasure box and the dolphin home.” Then Rob said “Let’s get some fish for dinner tonight.” “Can we come back tomorrow?”
“OK,” said Rob.

By Stephanie

1 comments:

Neil Hirini said...

A story with a happy ending. Well done.