he woke up with a smile and a giggled and a laughed
Thursday, May 6, 2010
Angels blog activity
what emotion was it?
{Happy}shh don't tell
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Monday, May 3, 2010
tamara
She strided around with a frown on her sunburnt face.
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Jackson
WALT:use descriptive sentences to show,not tell
{sad}He cried a river because his mother died. As they walked away from her grave they stared to cry a water fall.
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Leteisha
WALT: use descriptive sentences to show, not tell emotion.
There lived a little girl she is quite and lonely she doesn't have many friends she doesn't like to talk much but she is kind and caring. She would sit in her chair and look at the teacher with her glooming eyes.
(She is shy)
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Maia
WALT:use descriptive sentences to show emotion not tell emotion
{sad}The boy watched with his watery eyes as the dog got hit by a car his bottom lip trembled and his eyes poured out water like a waterfall he tried to mop up the tears that streamed down his checks but it was no use the tears kept spilling out he could give his tears to people at Africa if he continued to cry.THE END
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